Justice System: I Litigate for the Whole City

Chapter 187 : Erasure Marks at Page Number



Chapter 187 : Erasure Marks at Page Number



The courier envelope was kraft paper, sealed with two strips of tape. The paper cutter slid down the side. Out first came a Proof of Service, then the thin bound booklet.


April 20th, 10 a.m. The noodle shop downstairs had just finished the breakfast rush. Someone was hosing down the tiles, the sound of water rising from beneath the window.


He Xiufen set her enamel mug on the corner of the long table, lid still on. "Read the date."


Bottom right of the cover: Ningchuan Qiushi Judicial Appraisal Office. First page, dated April 17th.


"Sent back on March 19th. Thirty days." She said, "Today's the 20th."


"It walked itself back within the thirty days." He Xiufen picked up the mug and carried it to the window. "You read it. I won't look."


The table of contents was different from the last one. The previous version's first line had read "Catalogue of Four Items Submitted for Appraisal." This one's first line read:


"Basis of Materials: Thirty-four pages of sealed materials already in the case file, numbered page by page. See attachment sequence table."


She read line by line. When she reached item eight, she stopped. After item eight in the attachment sequence table, there was a line of small print: Nursing Record, page eight, erasure marks visible at page number.


Last month, in the corridor outside the Third Courtroom, Lu Zhicheng had clutched his document envelope and said "If I'm told to write 'marks present,' I'll write 'marks present.'" She'd answered, "Don't write it for me." Today, that line—he'd written it himself.


She laid the photocopy of the old opinion on the left, the photocopy of the sealing inventory on the right.


The left one read: Reviewed page eight of the medical records. The entries on this page are continuous, with no trace of alterations or additions.


The middle one read: Erasure marks visible at page number on this page.


The right-hand inventory, dated New Year's Day, read: Erasure marks.


[Thud. The paper had been moved back to its original spot. The indentation still matched.]


Further on came the conclusion. Three findings of fault, each set out in its own paragraph:


One: Chengbei Hospital failed to discharge its obligation to inform Chen Xiaoman of the autopsy. The signature field on the notice document was blank. Fault established.


Two: The medical records were improperly written and managed. The shift handover record showed post-hoc reorganization, transcription, and inserted content. Page eight of the Nursing Record showed erasure marks at the page number. Fault established.


Three: The procurement, acceptance, and receiving procedures for the Carbetocin Injection were incomplete. There was no written basis for its use. Fault established.


Final paragraph of the conclusion: A causal relationship exists between the above faults of Chengbei Hospital and the death of the subject Chen Xiaoman from postpartum hemorrhage. The degree of causal contribution is assessed as equal.


The old opinion had said: The degree of causation between Chengbei Hospital's improper medical record writing and management and Chen Xiaoman's death is assessed as minor.


She added one line at the very bottom of the three-column sheet. Left column: "minor." Middle column: "equal." Right column: blank.


Only then did He Xiufen walk back from the window, put on her glasses, and read through the two conclusion pages once, then read the catalogue entry twice, and hung the glasses from her collar.


"The line about page eight is worth more than all three findings combined," she said. "Three findings—he saw those. This line—he looked again."


"From minor to equal."


"His first copy was him reading someone else's paper."


She copied that line into her notebook. When she was done, she pulled out her phone and sent one line to the number she'd never saved. Not one word added:


Erasure marks at page number


Three words came back: He wrote it.


She stared at the screen for two seconds, then replied: Mm.


At 2:30 p.m., at the court's case filing window. She submitted two documents: a Supplementary Evidence List with three blank columns—one for the document, one for the source, one for the date—and an Application for Evidence Collection, requesting the court to obtain from the Market Supervision Bureau the relevant pages of the drug warehouse receiving register and the on-site inspection record.


The clerk at the window counted the pages, stamped them, and pushed the receipt back out.


"When did the defendant's side receive the corrected opinion?"


"Same day it was mailed. Signed for on the morning of the 20th." The clerk said, "Same hour as the copy in your hand."


She put the receipt away. Outside, a gust of wind caught a sheet of paper on the steps and sent it rolling twice along the ground.


* * *


That evening, scallion oil hit the wok, and the sounds from downstairs surged up wave after wave. He Xiufen wiped down the long table and had her lay out the papers she'd need to read in court, in order. The table was under two meters. The papers didn't fit.


"Split them into three stacks."


The first stack was paper: page eight of the sealed Nursing Record, the original and transcribed copies of the shift handover record, the "Self-Review Statement" with its line reading "verification found no written record," and the blank signature line on the "Statement on Clinical Use."


The second stack was the drug: the surname in the drug warehouse receiving register, the two empty receiver fields on the two shipment documents, the two same-day invoices—Hengyue selling to Hengkang, Hengkang selling to Chengbei—the March 22nd return-to-warehouse slip, and the 186-yuan line on the daily charge sheet.


The third stack was a single sheet: seven characters written in Lin Qi's own hand.


He Xiufen pushed the third stack forward until it aligned with the second.


"Paper first, then the drug," she said. "If you start with the drug, one 'technical matters aren't my field' from him and the whole stack slides by."


"If you start with the paper, you make them first admit they altered it themselves."


"That's it." He Xiufen said, "When you read it, don't read it point by point. String it together—the paper was touched, the source can't be produced, the drug's provenance is unclear. Three things, one line."


"What are the two ends of the line?"


"One end is that notice document. The other end is that injection." He Xiufen said, "There's not a single name in the middle."


She memorized the positions of the three stacks and ran the sequence through her mind once.


On the 21st and 22nd, she copied each of the three stacks once, went to the hospital, and went over with Lin Qi the questions she'd ask that day. The white coat had been washed and was hanging from the bed rail. Lin Qi asked if she could wear it to court. She said yes, then added, "Wait for me at the courtroom door. We'll go in together."


"Before the 24th, submit the remaining page of supporting material from Lin Qi's explanation to the commission," He Xiufen said.


"I'll remember."


"And the witness?"


"Lin Qi has agreed to appear. Master Dong won't take the stand—according to He Min, he went back on his own the day before yesterday and added two lines in the 'other matters requiring explanation' box on the last page of the inspection record, then signed it."


"If he doesn't show, those five vials are still just one old man's story." He Xiufen took off her glasses. "The plaintiff himself."


"The summons was issued in his name."


"Get him there." She said, "He doesn't have to speak. He just has to sit there."


As they were clearing the table, He Xiufen added one more thing.


"He'll call you in the next couple of days."


"What would he call about?"


"He's out of new paper. There's only one thing left he can try—rattle you, keep you off balance."


That night she opened the Unsettled Ledger. The page was still just those two lines. Not one word more.


* * *


On the afternoon of the 24th, at the Health Commission window. She submitted one photocopied page of the "Self-Review Statement" (stamped "Verified Against Original"), one printed shift schedule page (the December 30th slot crossed out, a different name written in), and half a page of explanation stating the source and date. She took the receipt.


"The 24th." The clerk glanced at the desk calendar. "The last day."


At 10-something in the morning on the 25th, Song Qiming called.


"Attorney Shen, I've received the opinion."


"On my end it arrived the morning of the 20th."


"Same office, same appraiser. March 11th he writes 'minor.' April 17th he writes 'equal.'" He said, "In between, not one new item entered the file."


"In between, one sentence entered: based on the sealed materials already in the case." She said, "If you want to apply for a redetermination of the appraisal institution, or to have the appraiser appear in court, put it in writing and file it with the court. I'll take a copy. Whatever's said over the phone, I don't record."


"I'll file it."


"Before you file it, I'd like to hear one thing."


"Go ahead."


There was a pause on the other end. "I represent the defendant," he said. "What's in the record, I report. What isn't in the record, I don't add and I don't delete. Same goes for these four pages."


"See you tomorrow."


"See you tomorrow." He was about to hang up, then added half a sentence: "When it comes to reading paper, I'm not your equal. The rest... we'll talk tomorrow."


She put down her phone and added a line at the bottom of the call log: 25th, 10:12 a.m. Defendant's counsel Song Qiming called. States he will apply for redetermination of the appraisal institution and for the appraiser to appear in court.


* * *


At 8:50 p.m., the noodle shop was filling up. Someone stopped at the foot of the stairs. His feet didn't lift.


Peng Weidong. Jacket collar up, phone in his hand, not clenched into a fist.


"Come in. Sit."


He came in and sat down, placing his phone face-up in front of her. A call log entry: unsaved number, 20:47, duration one minute and forty seconds.


"Same person, same number from last time," he said. "Last time he said the number could still go up. This time he gave me a number."


"How much."


"Three million eight hundred thousand. Child support separate, in one lump sum." He said, "He said no signature needed."


"Conditions."


"Just one." Peng Weidong placed both hands on his knees. "Tomorrow, I don't go."


[Thud. The words "withdraw the lawsuit" were someone else's price tag, too.]


Someone downstairs shouted for extra noodles. She got up, poured a glass of water, set it by his hand, and didn't rush him.


"He said the money could be transferred tomorrow morning," Peng Weidong said. "I could hear him smiling when he said it."


"How long were you standing downstairs today?"


"Half an hour."


"I know."


"Zhixia, tell me straight." He looked up. "If I go tomorrow, when does the money reach my hands?"


"Fastest is a month after judgment. Slower—I won't give you a date." She said, "Enforcement still depends on what's in their accounts. I won't give you a date."


"The money for not going is cash now." He said it very quietly. "The money for going is paper."


"It is paper." She said, "But on that paper, two characters will be printed."


"Which two?"


"Equal." She said, "That's where the truth of how your wife died is written. If that money never enters the judgment, then in this case, nobody was at fault. And when your child grows up and asks, what you'll still be holding is the paper you've scraped together over these six months."


Peng Weidong didn't answer. He flipped the phone over, then back.


"If you don't show tomorrow, the hearing will be dismissed as a withdrawal," she said. "All my paper becomes waste paper."


"Don't bring her into this," he said. "I know you're going to bring her into this."


"I'm going to bring her into this." She pushed the glass of water toward him. "She wrote seven characters. In her own hand."


He fished a pack of cigarettes from his pocket, then shoved it back. He stood up, smoothed his jacket collar down, then flipped it up again.


"Tomorrow I'll wear this. Is that all right." He pulled the jacket open a little. The shirt underneath was washed pale, with an old crease at the collar.


"It's fine."


He stood at the top of the stairs, not moving. "She bought it for me. I've worn it twice."


"Then wear it a third time tomorrow."


"What if I can't get up in the morning?"


"Eight o'clock. I'll be outside your building."


"Your way of blocking people—same move you used on that old man at the warehouse." His mouth twitched into something like a grin.


"It's different." She said, "He didn't want to come. Tonight, you still wanted to come."


He went downstairs.


She stayed where she was, listening to him take the stairs one step at a time, listening to the noodle shop door open and shut, listening to someone downstairs call out "Take care."


The glass of water on the table was untouched.


The desk calendar was open to April. A line was drawn under the 15th and under the 24th. The line under the 26th—she'd drawn that one on April 13th. She hadn't traced over it a second time yet.



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